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满分作文中考必背0011

频道满分作文 来源本站 作者博维老师 时间2018-11-22 浏览

【写作指导】这是一篇应用文,文中要求委婉的向对方提出他的行为对自己造成的困扰,同时还要向对方提出请求。语气既不能太强烈让对方不舒服,同时还要让对方理解自己。应该选择一些含有情态动词的句子或建议句型,如 Would you like to...? I hope that... You might...等。

【满分作文中考必背0011】

Dear Frank, 

        It's your neighbor, Judy. I'm sorry to bother you,  but I really have some problems. Recently,  I can often hear you play the guitar and sing songs and at night. It does disturb me a lot for a few days. And also my grandparents need to have a rest. So would you like to play the guitar a little earlier? I will be very thankful for that. BoveyEdu

                                        Sincerely yours, 

                                        Judy

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【写作指导】这是一篇典型的记叙文,要求介绍你和一件礼物的故事。首先介绍礼物是什么,接下来最重要的是这份礼物给你带来的震撼(感动/回忆/转变... ...),抓住其中的一点细致描写。另外,这份礼物不仅仅可以是“实物”,也可以是一个拥抱、一个赞美、一个眼神、一次鼓励... ...文章主体部分应采用一般过去时态。

【满分作文中考必背0011】

                  Story on a Gift copyright BoveyEdu.Cn

       In the drawer of my writing table, there is an old ticket to a lantern show. I have kept it for a long time or maybe I will keep it for a lifetime to remember my father and his love.

       On a Lantern Festival in my childhood, there was a lantern show in Labor Park.  Many children went there with their parents. I knew my father was too busy to take me there,  and I also knew he couldn't afford the ticket. Tears rolled down my cheeks sadly. The next day,  My father came back home for work as usual,  and after dinner he said, “ Today I've got two tickets and let's go to the Labour Park together.” I couldn't believe my ears. I was so excited that I couldn't help jumping up.

       Till now my father has been away from us for many years, but I still keep this old ticket.  I will never forget his deep love. boveyedu.cn

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